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Jenni Gould's Resume - Critique Request

by Jenni
(Nashville, IN)

Webmaster's Note: This page has Jenni's uploaded resume. She is looking for feedback and critiques from visitors to the site. Won't you help her out by commenting below and rating the resume using our 5-star system? Please make your criticism constructive, i.e., offer specifics on how it could be improved, if necessary, or what you think is particularly good about it. THANKS! — Kathi


Self-motivated leader eager to enable and support (organization name) to achieve its mission through hard-work and dedication to high-ideals. A proven track record of a high level of success in team-oriented environments. Strong professional and academic credentials.

B.S. Public Management; May 2006; Indiana University, Bloomington IN; GPA 3.89/4.00

Bright & Williamson Ins Agencies, Nashville IN; May 2003 - Jan 2008

Insurance Agent
  • Communicate clearly and effectively with customers concerning inquiries and requests; mediate between customers, insurance companies, and legal firms

  • Consult with and support other agents in Nashville and Bloomington offices

  • Manage over 200 commercial and personal insurance policies including policies for
    Brown County and the Town of Nashville

  • Generated and maintain system for updating customer files to ensure adequate information

WorldVenture-Macau, Macau SAR of China; Sept 2007-July 2008
Administration Assistant/Student Facilitator

  • Modernized field communication through database, website, and time-management tool development to reach client base of over 200 contacts throughout Mainland China

  • Successfully led fundraising campaign that generated $20,000 in new revenues

  • Maintained donor relations with those in the United States through several means of communication

  • Taught university level English and developed weekly activities for approximately 25 students

Community Involvement:

  • Youth Leader, New Life Community Church- Impart guidance into the lives of youth between the ages of 12 to 18, plan and organize community-wide events, brainstorm and implement ideas with fellow leaders as to best achieve our mission

  • Guest Teacher, Brown County School Corporation- Facilitated classroom activities for a wide range of grade levels; assisted with under-privileged and handicapped students in challenging classroom environment

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Dec 07, 2008
by: Tiger

Hey,Jenni.I try to search your blog website, and it is interesting to find this website! Your GPA is super super super high. And thanks for everything you did for Macao students. We all will miss you!^&^

Oct 16, 2008
Great Resume!
by: Kathi

This is an excellently written resume, Jenni. You've done a solid job of summarizing your responsibilities and achievements in each position in a powerful way.

Be sure to check for typos and make sure your bullet points under each job are all in the same tense.

Great job!

To your success,

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