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Objective To attain a position that would utilize my customer service, organizational and computer skills
Skills
Customer Service & Sales ● Administrative Assistant ● Assistant Manager
Excellent verbal, written, and communication skills
Patient, understanding and willing to learn
Able to multitask, work independently and work in a team oriented environment
Natural capacity for organization and detail oriented
Strong interpersonal, analytical and problem solving skills
Proficiency in MS Windows Office including Excel, Outlook, PowerPoint, Publisher and Word
Typing: WPM 45 + as well as 10 Key: 8,000 – 10,000 KPH
Professional Experience and Accomplishments
Customer Service & Sales
Worked in both inbound/outbound work environments selling bank products to consumers.
Provided high quality customer service using proper phone etiquette and listening skills.
Used patience, understanding, and product knowledge to assist and sell to customers.
Achieved expected sales goal by over 15%.
Administrative Assistant
Performed a variety of administrative
support services from addressing inquiries of current and potential clients to preparing and mailing out marketing information.
Improved filling system, developed templates for sending out marketing cover letters, reduced travel expenses by using the Internet to book travel.
Used MS Word and Excel to manage RSVP list and create reports.
Successfully coordinated and assisted with corporate fundraising, creating invitations, managing reservations, collecting donations, and sending out thank you letters.
Assistant Manager
Supervised and directed employees in a retail drug store with over $47 billions in revenue.
Prepared and arranged products in store for promotional displays and sales.
hi marie my name is marie too and i live in menesota i just want to tell you that you did a wonderful job with your resume i love and and i which you can just teach me how to do it.
love marie
Jul 18, 2008 Rating
Nice Job! by: Mary
Marie – Nice job! It’s clear and it’s obvious what you’ve done and what you want to do. I like your Objective sentence myself – very clear and not unnecessarily wordy. However,I would change the word “attain” to “obtain.” Also – for the fourth bullet under Skills, I would change it around a bit to read: "Detail-oriented with a natural capacity for organization."
Good luck.
Jun 06, 2008 Rating
good by: Anonymous
for me marie u did it nice, it's not that so great but its nice.
May 28, 2008 Rating
Excellent & Succinct Job! by: Anonymous
Marie, I think you've done a fine job of outlining all of your skills, strengths, and accomplishments in an actionable, quantifiable way. The only thing I would work on is improving your resume objective. As it stands, it's kind of boring. Better to make it a bit more dynamic, or even consider replacing it with a power statement like the ones found here on this site.