Keerthika Resume Critique Request

by Keerthika
(Ontario, Canada)

OBJECTIVE
Gain Some experience in the job force
Expand on my knowledge and skills.
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SKILLS
-Team player
- Easy to talk to
-Planning Events
-Open for change (flexible)
-Helpful, good with teaching people
-Outgoing Personality
- Motivated and can be independent
EDUCATION
Lester B Pearson Collegiate Institute , Scarborough, September 2006 - Ongoing
Diploma in Life Science and Accounting , 84 Grade Point Average

COMMUNITY INVOLVEMENT
Malvern Resource Center (ongoing)
-Organize events , help plan,

Christmas Gift Wrapping (Epilepsy Toronto)
Charity (ongoing end of December)

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Dec 07, 2009
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Needs Some Work
by: Kathi

I assume you have never worked before as I don't see any job experience listed here? Your resume objective definitely needs some work; see this section on writing resume objectives for more info.

It looks like you might have some volunteer experience (the gift wrapping, etc.?). If so, I'd label it as such, especially with no job experience and list it more formally, so that it looks more like actually work experience. And be sure to offer at least a few bullets of skills/achievements in each volunteer position. The skills you list up front are great though!