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DTanner Resume Critique Request

by David
(Ogden, UT, USA)

A motivated and dedicated professional prepared to take on responsibility.


Computer and Office
Experienced working with word processors, spreadsheets, databases, and mathematics software. Programming experience with C++.

Great oral and written communication skills. Capable to present information for both groups and individuals. Able to work well under stressful conditions. Detail oriented while keeping the big picture in mind.


South Ogden City - South Ogden, Utah
August 2008 to November 2008
Parks Worker
Assisted in city park maintenance and improvement.

Sylvan Learning Center - Layton, Utah
May 2007 to August 2007
Mathematics Teacher
Taught elementary, junior high, and high school students mathematics skills.

New College of Florida - Sarasota, FL
November 2006 to March 2007
Math Tutor
Held office hours for students to receive one-on-one mathematics assistance to become prepared for college level mathematics. Researched diagnostic test formats to access calculus readiness of the incoming 2007-2008 class.

Law Office of William H. Namack, III - Sarasota, FL
February 2005 to October 2006
Legal Assistant

Began as an archival scanner and receptionist. Responsibilities expanded to drafting client correspondence, paying bills, recording costs, and preparing legal documents.


Actuary Examinations
May 2008
Passed Probability and Financial Mathematics Examinations

New College of Florida (the Honors college of the state university system)- Sarasota, FL
May 2007
Bachelor of Arts Degree, Mathematics \ Economics

High School Diploma (International Baccalaureate)
Pensacola High School - Pensacola, FL
May 2002

References available upon request

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Jan 12, 2009
Great Start
by: Kathi

This is a great effort; however, I don't think you've done the best job at selling yourself. Rather than a short paragraph under each job, bullets would be more effective. Each bullet should be an action word. See the Resume Tips here for more information.

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