Alix Schroder Resume Critique Request

by Alix Shroder
(Somewhere)

OBJECTIVE 2009-2010 OISS internship position


WORK EXPERIENCE

The Schwalm’s Chicago, IL Sept.-Jan 2008
Nanny
I was the nanny for an infant child. Responsibilities included feeding, napping, and playing with the baby. I also helped around the house when needed, which included light housekeeping, laundry, and organizing.

The Doyle’s Minneapolis, MN June-Aug 2008
Nanny
I was the nanny for two school-age children. Responsibilities included organizing schedules, planning activities, preparing meals, and transporting the kids to and from activities.

DePaul University Chicago, IL Sept-Dec 2007
Chicago Quarter Mentor
I worked for DePaul co-teaching a freshman orientation class. Responsibilities included creating weekly lesson plans highlighting DePaul’s many services, teaching the class, and being available to mentor outside the classroom.

Gigi Olive Interiors, LLC Minneapolis, MN Dec 2006- 2008
Office Assistant
I worked as a part-time office assistant for interior designer Gigi Olive. Responsibilities included answering the phone, scheduling appointments, filing, running errands, and assisting with organizing tasks around the office.


EXTRACURRICULAR EXPERIENCE
DePaul University Model UN Chicago, IL 2008-Present
Member

DePaul Club Soccer Chicago, IL 2006-Present
Co-Captain

Student Leadership Institute Chicago, IL 2007-2008
LEAD-IN Peer Mentor

HONORS
• Dean’s List at DePaul University
• Phi Kappa Phi Honor Society Member
• International Baccalaureate Medallion Recipient

SKILLS
• Proficient in Microsoft Works (Word, Excel, and Powerpoint)
• Proficient with the Internet
• Bilingual in Spanish

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Sep 23, 2009
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Looks Pretty Good
by: Kathi

Alix... What is here looks pretty good, though a bit more detailing on accomplishments, not just responsibilities, might be valuable. I also notice you're missing your Education section, which does need to be included. I would also write your objective as a more detailed, complete sentence.

Good luck!
Kathi

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